wow. A nice, sweet story with the use of ... (um... could I know what is RAWM? please?) <OK, I'll just take it as an extraterrestrial being with a human IQ of 2786.> Then again, the story has a unique twist, with a rather "peaceful" description of sunsets first, followed by a more mature-type ending (the kill part). Excellent. Very pleasing to the reader. Keep up the good work!
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Re: A Coat
May 26, 2008 by nicholasquekws
cool! There is a feeling of mystery within the poem itself...
